#2 on the free review list comes from Geneva Switzerland, at parking-friend.com, a site for valet parking at the airport and other places.
Summary:
The squint test: One visual design trick is to squint your eyes and see how the page balances. The two dominant elements stand out like this (see below). The problem is that neither one earns it’s prominence, and they demand this first order attention on every single page.

Simplified redesign:
Taking into account the above, this design simplifies the grid. The visual elements now fit the page, instead of demanding an unwarranted amount of pixels and attention. All text is one color, the hide/show UI is replaced by a simple radio button scheme. I also cleaned up the navbar, moving the language choices and log-in into a tighter layout.
Before and After:

A few things I missed:
Hello Scott,
Thanks a lot for investing your time in this, helps us a lot to better understand our googleAnalytics rates ! I hope Adrian has some time left to apllie that ;o)
Again thank you !!!
Dieter, co-founder ParkigFriend
The original design looked kind of like a webpage embedded in a poster. Shrinking the logo real estate down drastically was a great step as were most of the other changes, but I still think the general “tone” of the page could be knocked down several notches. I know big is in, but you need to balance that look with a subtle palette and a tight layout.
Overall, great work – I love before and after write-ups.
Jason
[...] pattern distracts from the page. Like ParkingFriend, this isn’t a poster and there’s no need to draw attention to the page. Patterns in the [...]
Thanks Scott! This is a great piece of advice. I will show it to my customers ASAP!